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["Sayki, Bade" <badesayki AT lanl.gov>]

Dear Collaborators,

 

Thank you for your thoughtful comments on the poster. I have implemented most of the suggestions and edits.

We are still waiting on resolving the community membership issue. In the meantime, Hugo was able to upload the pdf to invenio to allow for sufficient time for comments.

Here is a link: https://sphenix-invenio.sdcc.bnl.gov/records/xpfdc-4w992

 

Best,

Bade

 

From: Ross Corliss <ross.corliss AT stonybrook.edu>
Date: Thursday, August 24, 2023 at 9:22 AM
To: "Sayki, Bade" <badesayki AT lanl.gov>
Cc: "sphenix-calibration-l AT lists.bnl.gov" <sphenix-calibration-l AT lists.bnl.gov>, "Pereira Da Costa, Hugo Denis Antonio via Sphenix-tpot-l" <sphenix-tpot-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [Sphenix-calibration-l] TPOT QM 2023 Poster

 

Hi Sayki,

 

I will repeat the others:  Very nice presentation.  There is a lot to show!

 

I would caution that as a side effect, there is a LOT of text on this poster.  If you can reduce wordiness, you can make the font, and the pictures, larger.

 

Some suggestions, if you're willing:

 

sPHENIX will take data in pp, p-Au and Au-Au collisions at √sNN =200GeV. The experiment started with Au-Au beam in May 2023. sPHENIX Collaboration will take data for three years.

==>

sPHENIX will take data in pp, p-Au and Au-Au collisions at √sNN =200GeV. The three year program started with Au-Au beam in May 2023.

 

To achieve the physics results desired, The trajectory must be measured to an accuracy better than 100μm. This will ensure sufficient momentum and invariant mass resolution.

==> (capitalization of 'the', too)

To achieve the desired momentum resolution, the trajectory must be measured to an accuracy better than 100μm. 

 

This can potentially interfere with the data taking, which means that it can only be done when the beam is off. Measured during commissioning without beam.

==>

This can potentially interfere with track reconstuction, which means that it can only be done when the beam is off.

 

Fluctuations of the beam-induced distortions due to multiplicity/centrality fluctuations at Length scale <100μm and Time Scale O(10ms)

==> (capitalization)

Fluctuations of the beam-induced distortions due to multiplicity/centrality fluctuations at length scale <100μm and time scale O(10ms)

 

The distortions reconstructed in the region of the TPC that correspond to the TPOT acceptance are extrapolated to the full TPC acceptance using the data provided by the diffuse laser system.

==> (I suggest to move this from the TPOT Structure to the TPOT Purpose sections)

 

The detectors are supported on a cradle structure. Each module consists of two detectors, a tray, front end electronics and plenty cabling and gas plumbing!

==> (adding missing word)

The detectors are supported on a cradle structure. Each module consists of two detectors, a tray, front end electronics and plenty of cabling and gas plumbing!

 

In Pre-Installation, I think you could safely replace High Voltage and Low Voltage with HV and LV to make it less crowded.

 

Gas and full HV system authorization => May 18th, 2023

==> (In all of these, you could remove the day of the week, which would let you expand the performance plots.  In this one in particular, the '=>' seems to have tabbed over)

Gas and full HV system authorization =>May, 2023

 

TPOT has been operating routinely since May 20th, 2023

==>

Operating routinely since May 20th, 2023

 

 

 

 

 

I think your selection of graphics is very nicely balanced between cartoons of how it works, pictures of construction, and plots of performance, and the story is presented very well.  I'm sure it will be well received at the conference. 

 

Regards,

 

-Ross

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Dr. Ross Corliss

Research Assistant Professor
Center for Frontiers in Nuclear Science
Stony Brook University
virtual office:  https://stonybrook.zoom.us/my/rossoffice?pwd=ZmZ2SlRIMVFvUUJwbUkyOVNVTmE5QT09

On Aug 24, 2023, at 6:16 AM, Maxence Vandenbroucke <maxence.vandenbroucke AT cea.fr> wrote:

 

Hi Bade very nice poster, I’m keeping it !

 

Maybe you could precise that the Micromegas have resistive strips for the high flux and use zigzags readout like the TPC (with strips). Also it would be nice to write that the detector design and production was done at Saclay.

 

One typo I think : 

electronic channels -> electronics channels 

 

Best regards,

 

Maxence

On 24 Aug 2023, at 01:02, Sayki, Bade via sPHENIX-calibration-l <sphenix-calibration-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

 

Dear Collaborators,

Please find the attached first draft for the TPOT QM2023 poster.

Due to technical difficulties, I am unable to upload to invenio. A ticket has been submitted. Thank you for your patience.

Looking forward to your comments. 

Best,

Bade

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