sPHENIX EMCal discussion

["Aidala, Christine" <caidala AT bnl.gov>]

Hi, Anabel and all.  I read through the updated draft and only have minor comments.

 

Christine

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Fig. 2 caption – “consists on” -> “consists of”

 

Table 1 – “O2” -> “O$_2$”

 

L 113 – “more than 99% light transmitting fibers” – Maybe “more than 99% of the design number of light transmitting fibers” would be slightly clearer.

 

L 137 – I would think that heat would only be generated by the electronics, and not by the SiPMs themselves.

 

L 146 – “SiPMs voltage” -> “SiPM voltage”

 

L 176 – Is there a publicly available reference that could be added for RCDAQ?

 

L 182 – “placed in” -> “placed on”

 

L 223 – “Birk’s” -> “Birks’” (His last name was “Birks”)

 

L 248 – “Cherenkov’s energy spectrum” -> “Cherenkov counter’s energy spectrum”

 

L 255 – “veto’s energy spectrum” -> “veto detector’s energy spectrum”

 

L 278 – “Moliere” – This should have a grave rather than acute accent (as correctly written on L 90).

 

L 303 – “consisted on” -> “consisted of”

 

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Christine A. Aidala

Associate Professor

Department of Physics

University of Michigan

 

 

 

 

From: sPHENIX-EMCal-l <sphenix-emcal-l-bounces AT lists.bnl.gov> On Behalf Of Romero Hernandez, Anabel
Sent: Tuesday, January 28, 2020 11:50 AM
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Subject: [Sphenix-emcal-l] draft of EMCal test beam paper

 

Hello everyone,

 

Thank you for the first round of comments on the draft of the EMCal test beam paper! The comments have been taken into account and the draft has been updated. The specific responses to each comment can be found here:

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AQ84lp_2IyVX13GLbjUwqxCGzumvp1DFKNqQEkY2HEE/edit?usp=sharing

 

We would like to circulate the updated draft to the full sPHENIX list by the end of this week, and in order to facilitate that I have attached the current version of the draft. Please take a look at the draft and send any further comments before the EMCal meeting on Friday morning.

 

Best,

Anabel