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  • From: "W.A. Zajc" <zajc AT nevis.columbia.edu>
  • To: Blair Daniel Seidlitz <blair.daniel.seidlitz AT cern.ch>, Blair Daniel Seidlitz via sPHENIX-HCal-l <sphenix-hcal-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
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  • Subject: Re: [Sphenix-hcal-l] Calorimeter Calibrations draft slides
  • Date: Tue, 5 Dec 2023 07:49:30 -0500

Hi Blair:

Very nice slides! This is approaching “documentation” !!

Not sure this is in tune for this AM’s presentation, but just in case. 

By slide number:

  3: “saved in integer milli-sample precision” - not sure what this means.


 4: “example at chi2=1e6” If I understand the figure, isn’t it at 1e5 ?

     “speed up” —> “sped up”


 5: ”a  spectra" —> “ a spectrum”
      (I think you also want spectrum in next bullet as well, but it’s ambiguous)
     
      commented —> “commented on”

 8: “of an obvious” —> “as an obvious”

     “he pio” —> “the pio”

     “by the same clusters” —> “from the same clusters”


10: “Hanpu, Shuhang” —> “Hanpu Jiang, Shuhang Li” 


12: “saved in integer milli-sample precision” - same question about what this means

14: “at the 1-5%” —> “at the 1-5% level”

15: “is used to generate” —> generates


18: Position —> position



Best regards,

Bill 

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W.A. Zajc
I.I. Rabi Professor of Physics
Columbia University
New York, NY 10027

https://blogs.cuit.columbia.edu/waz1/
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On Dec 4, 2023, at 11:49 AM, Blair Daniel Seidlitz via sPHENIX-HCal-l <sphenix-hcal-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear all,

Attached are a set of draft slides for the CM presentation tomorrow.  Any comments encouraged. 

Best,
Blair
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