STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Xiaofeng,

Thank you very much for your comments.

Updated draft is available under the same location.

Please find my comments below:

Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 08.03.2021, o godz. 08:49:

Hi Hanna,

    Very nice presentation.

    I have only few minor suggestions for you to consider :

    1. Slide 13, You mention :
    QCD calculations predict a peak near to the QGP transition threshold - signature of first-order phase transition?
    Do you have any reference for this statement ?

This statement is directly taken from the STAR paper.

    2. I found in this slide the crossover results from model are more closer to the STAR measured
        Rout/Rside at different energies. Is it contradict with the signature of first-order phase transition on
        slide 13 ?

Yes, having already just predictions of vHLEE+UrQMD available, published so far STAR results are closer to cross-over calculation.

We need more model comparison.

    3. Slide 15-18 :  The reference is a QM proceedings. Please put "STAR preliminary" label on the figure, if those results are not
        formally published by STAR.

Done.

    4. If possible, the summary would be more concise.

I have made it little bit shorter.

With my best regards,

Hanna

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng


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