STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Risa Nishitani <s2312412 AT gmail.com>]

Dear Xiaofeng,

Thank you for your comments.

I fixed and uploaded them in the below link.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/54088

Also, the CPOD slides were uploaded in the below link.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/54110

Best regards,

Risa

2021年3月7日(日) 23:53 Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:

Hi Risa,

     Very nice presentation.

     Slide 1, add "for the STAR Collaboration"

     Slide 2, Y. Aoki -> Y. Aoki, et al.

     Slide 3,  I suggest to mention X, Y should be independent variable
for the additive relation.
                   And Skellam = Possion - Poission'  should be also
independent Poission.


     Slide 4, the STAR PRL paper is published online already, please put
journal # :
                 STAR Collaboration, Phys. Rev. Lett. 126, 092301 (2021)
and also add long paper : STAR Collaboration, arXiv : 2101. 12413

                 Possible signal from critical point -> Possible
signature of critical point

     Slide 5, Title : cross over -> crossover
                 Bullet 1： suggest change to :  From peripheral to
central, the values of C6/C2 change from positive to negative.
                 Bullet 2:  -> Lattice QCD calculations at mu_B =0 show
negative C6/C2.

     Slide 7, Please define the Refmult3 and the Charge Particle
Multiplicity used in slide 9, 10, 12.

     Slide 12, The left plot, 0-5% central data point is not in the
center of the error band.
                    It is not clear what is the centrality for each
Au+Au data points, especially right plot.
                    I suggest to put centrality percentage values close
to the light blue scale.

     With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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