STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Yu Zhang <zhang_yu AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Xiaofeng,

Thank you very much for your comments.

I have implemented them and updated slides in the same link.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/54276

Best regards,

Yu

On Mar 24, 2021, at 3:57 AM, Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Yu,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my minor comments/suggestions below:

    1. slide 1, add "for the STAR Collaboration"
    2. slide 2, last bullet  -> Scan the QCD phase diagram by varying collision energy
    3. Slide 4, Motivation -> theoretical expectations. from 39 to 200 GeV -> from 200 to 39 GeV
        you may replace the top right plot with the plot from FRG calculations with energy dependence plot of
         C5/C1 and C6/C2.
    4. slide 11， for QCD partonic matter -> due to the transition between partonic to hadronic phase.

    5. slide 12,   QCD partonic matter -> due to the transition between partonic to hadronic phase.

    6. slide 13, we conclude -> it supports

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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