STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Yu,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my minor comments/suggestions below :

    1. Slide 1, add "for the STAR Collaboration"
    2. Slide 6, 17.1 -> 17.3, Please mark it as red, which will be 
taken after 7.7 GeV.
        And the slide title is FXT set-up, but in the table, you also 
list collider energies there.
       You may change the title of this slide.

    3. Slide 12, it would be nice if you can put a baseline in the plot 
(with least volume fluctuatiosn), which use the impact parameters or 
npart to
        apply CBWC.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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