Dear Dr. Zbroszczyk,
Thank you for your comments, I have implemented them and uploaded the new version. You can find the new version here:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/54655
Best regards,
Jonathan Ball
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Date: Thu, 15 Apr 2021 09:57:26 +0200
From: Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>
To: Star-cf <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Jonathan Gonzalo Ball
Cap for SQM 2021 submitted for review
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Dear Jonathan,
Please find below my comments to your nice slides:
Slide 4: add spaces between value and the unit: eg: 3.0GeV -> 3.0 GeV; 2.01m-> 2.01 m
Slide 5: Add units to (0,0), add space: 1.0cm -> 1.0 cm
Slide 6: Add more details about KF package, what is it, how it works, compare to the traditional methods of lambda selection; 1.0cm-> 1.0 cm (add space)
Slide 7: there is no need that centrality definition and pile up cut was provided by UC Davis group
Slide 9: add space: 1.5)GeV -> 1.5) GeV, add space: central(0-10%) -> central (0-10%)
Slide 10: add spaces: collisions(0-10%) -> collisions (0-10%); cumulants(C3, .. -> cumulants (C3, ..
Slide 11: add necessary spaces in the description of the Fig.14
Slide 12: 200GeV -> 200 GeV; 3GeV -> 3.0 GeV
Slide 13: 3.0GeV -> 3.0 GeV (twice).
Wit those implemented, I sign off.
Thanks,
Hanna
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Date: Thu, 15 Apr 2021 10:08:50 +0200
From: Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>
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Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Moe Isshiki for SQM 2021
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Dear Moe,
Nice abstract.
I have just one comment related to your title: add space between 3.0GeV -> 3.0 GeV.
With this implemented, I sign off.
Thanks,
Hanna
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