STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["JinWu" <wj2016113394 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Hi Hanna,

Done. Thank you for the comment. The updated version is at: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Intermittency-ISMD2021-STAR.pdf

Thanks,

Best Regards,

Jin

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From:  "Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Thu, Jul 8, 2021 07:32 PM

To:  "Star-cf"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Jin Wu for ISMD2021 submitted for review

 

Hi Jin,

I have just one comment to your nice slides:

Slide 1: move Au+Au to the one line.

With this implemented I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 08.07.2021, o godz. 05:24:

Hi Jin,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my suggestions below :

    1. Slide 3,  Title : Phase Diagram of QCD -> QCD Phase Diagram
                      arXiv: 2001. 02852  -> Maybe change to another reference.

    2. Slide 4, I suggest to remove this slide, as it is not quit related to your analysis

    3. Slide 8, I suggest to put this slide into backup or replace/remove the right figures
                    As we haven't discussed the experimental results yet, which will be discussed later.
                    Thus showing experimental results here maybe not appropriate.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng


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