STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Changfeng,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my comments/suggestions below :

    1. Slide 3, FO parameters -> Freeze-out parameters

    2. Slide 4, need to write down the mathematical definition of the 
off-diagonal cumulants.

    3. Slide 5, |eta|<1.4 -> |eta|< 1,  0.2 GeV/c -> 0.15 GeV/c

    4. Slide 6, need to write down the number of events used in the 
analysis.

    5. Slide 9, I don't understand the claim : "give the same results."
         If numerator are the same, but denominator are different. How 
could the results are the same ?
         Please re-phrase for the corresponding discussion and also in 
the summary.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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