STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Moe,

Please find my comments to your nice proceedings:

General comments: 

1. when you use k*, please make sure you use everywhere notation $k^{*}$ instead of $k*$.

2. Put your citations in increasing order, e.g. now you refer to [3, 4], next to [10, 12]. Please make sure you use them in correct order.

L1: Make sure use write the whole _expression_ p-\Xi in math mode (p should also be written in the math mode)

L6: Hyperon-hyperon -> hyperon-hyperon

L21: add referenced to the STAR and ALICE papers

Figure 1: increase the plot or increase the font sizes: axises, description of axises, the legends

L36: write the equation for Qinv. 

L39: add any reference to KFParticle finder.

L43 pair rest frame -> Pair Rest Frame (as PRF is an abbreviation)

L46: s -> is

L52: define k*

Figures 3 and 4: increase the font sizes: axises, description of axises, the legends

L61: add a short comment that you mean particles originating from weak decays that can be misidentified as  primordial particles or primary ones are considered to come from decays

L80: k* -> k^*

With those implemented, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

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