STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Toshihiro,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my comments and suggestions below :
    1. Slide 5 , 54.4 GeV is taken in 2017.
    2. Slide 6 : May specify that X, Y should be independent variable 
for additivity.
                 S and κ are non-gaussian fluctuations. -> S and κ are 
sensitive to non-gaussian fluctuations.
                Moment -> Central Moment

3. Slide 9, also put reference of STAR net-proton long paper.
    4. Slide 10, B. X. Luo  -> X. Luo
    5. Slide 13:  3 sigma -> 3.1 sigma

    6. Slide 18: long paper : replace arXiv number with Journal number.

    7. Slide 19: Huge datasets -> 10-20 times or you may specific the 
number of events collected.

    8. Slide 20: FXT  -> Fixed-target (FXT）: Need to explain what does 
FXT mean.  Add : Extend muB up to 720 MeV.

    9. Slide 22 : Non-binomial efficiencies -> Non-binomial eff. corr.
                        if the efficiency distributions deviate from 
binomial distribution -> If the response function of detector deviated 
from binomial distribution.
                        Efficiency distributions ->Detector response 
function

    10. Slide 24: The last two bullets can be merged into one : 
Detector efficiencies and volume fluctuations need to be carefully 
studied for each experiment.
                        The last sentence of first bullet and third 
bullet can be merged into  : Stay tuned for precise measurement from 
BES-II and FXT energies (3.3 - 19.6 GeV) to have more definitive message.

    11. You may add one slide to discuss the results of net-charge and 
net-kaon fluctuations, as your talk title is high moments analysis.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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