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  • From: Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>
  • To: STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>
  • Subject: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Ashish Pandav for CPOD March Meeting 2021 submitted for review
  • Date: Sat, 11 Sep 2021 17:02:35 +0800

Hi Ashish,

    Nice proceedings,
    Please find my comments/suggestions below :

    1. Line 16, We measured net-charge, which is not net-particle. Please modified accordingly.
    2. Line 20, serious -> series
    3. Line 23, field -> Functional
    4. Line 26, measurementment -> measurement
    5. Line 45,distributions -> distribution
    6. Please make clear in the text that the Equ. 2.3 and 2.4, is only valid for single variable distributions, for e.g., proton, but not valid for net-proton.
    7. Line 79-83 and in summary Line 111-114, it is stated that this increasing negative values for C6/C2 is consistent with cross-over nature from Lattice and FRG
    calculations.  Based on current wide centrality bin 0-40% and limited statistics, this statement is too strong, even stronger than the submitted C6 paper.
        1) in our submitted  C6 paper, we state that 27 GeV (Run 18) and 54.4 GeV C6/C2 is consistent with zero, where the deviation significance is stronger than current
            measurement (27 GeV with Run 11 with less statistics) and also current claim is based on 0-40% wide centrality bin.
        2) This statement is contradict with the statement in Line 32-33, the non-monotonic behavior consistent with calculations that included a critical point.

    Please rephrase the statement accordingly.  We may just quantify the significance of deviations within the energy range we studied.

    Line 92: quantitaive -> quantitative

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

On 2021/9/7 12:30, webmaster--- via Star-cf-l wrote:
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Ashish Pandav (apandav10 AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a review,
please have a look:
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