STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Xiaofeng,

Many thanks for your comments, corrected draft is located at the same place.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 11.09.2021, o godz. 18:42:

Hi Hanna,

    Nice proceedings.
    Please find my minor comments and suggestions below :

    1. abstract, 10^23 s ?  Please confirm.

    2. Introduction, sNN= 7.7, 11.5, 19.6, 27, 39, 62.4, 130, and 200 GeV in the collider mode. please also put 14.5, 54.4 GeV.

    3. Section 3.1, parallel to their both ? Please confirm.

    4. Section 3.1, Rout - Rside should be Rout/Rside, also in the caption of Fig.1.

    5. We require the mass square of pions to .....,   please make sure the unit of mass square is correct.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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