STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Hi Rachel,

Find below my comments to your nice slides:

Slide 1: I don’t know whether it is matter of application I use to open your file (Keynote) but what I see is that your name affiliation, name of the conference are written with very small font. Try to increase little bit.

Slide 4: nMIP plot is missing, define energy loss and most probable energy loss.

Enlarge the existing figure little bit as font sizes are really small.

Slide 5: second plot is missing

Slide 6: the figures needs improvement: very small fonts, axes not defined, bottom panels don’t have even units and descriptions.

Slide 7: Increase the plot

Slide 8: Increase plot text sizes

Slide 9: smaller figure has too small fonts too (axes, title)

Slide 10: Fix descriptions of axes, equation is very small

Slide 11: Finish the slide

Upload please a pdf file next time to make sure we have the same view of your slides.

Thanks, 

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:

Warsaw University of Technology

Faculty of Physics

Nuclear Physics Division

Koszykowa 75

Office: 117b (via 115)

00-662 Warsaw, Poland

Wiadomość napisana przez Skipper Kagamaster via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 01.10.2021, o godz. 18:32:

All,

I got an email failed notification, so sending this again just to be sure: This second presentation was submitted on behalf of Rachael Botsford (also at Lehigh). She's been having some drupal login issues and didn't want to hold up the submission any longer.

Thanks!

Skipper Kagamaster

PhD Student - Lehigh University

skk317 AT lehigh.edu

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