STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Jin,

I don’t have further comments related to the text, but font sizes on the figure 1 and 2 seem to very small comparing to the size of the text.

Please, increase them.

Implementing this and taking into account Xiaofeng’s comments, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 13.10.2021, o godz. 10:54:

Hi Jin,

    Very nice proceedings.
    Please find my minor comments/suggestions below :

    1. Line 23, predicted feature -> landmark
    2. Line 30，give rise to  -> lead
    3. Line 55, by Solenoidal Tracker at RHIC (STAR) experiment -> by the STAR experiment at RHIC
    4. Line 68, central collision -> central collisions. (please also check others)
    5. Line 40, Details of analysis -> Analysis Details
    6. Line 76, error is -> statistical error is
    7. Line 96,  This non-monotonic behavior needs to be investigated in more theory -> This non-monotonic behavior needs to be understood with more theoretical inputs.
    8. Line 96, significant -> significantly
    9. You may define the so called "charged particles" in your analysis details, before introducing the particle identification of pi,k.p.
    10. In Figures and text, 0%-5% -> 0-5%
    11. Line 74, obey very good -> exhibit

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng



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