STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Ho-san,

    Nice abstract.
    Please find my comments and suggestions below :
    1.  Line 6, create and study the quark-gluon plasma.-> create and 
study the strongly interacting
                    Quark-Gluon Plasma (sQGP).

    2. Line 8, to understand the QCD phase diagram. -> to understand 
the properties of sQGP and
        explore the QCD phase structure, such as critical point and/or 
first order phase transition boundary.

    3. Line 9, Delete "They are sensitive to the phase structure and 
the existence of a first-order phase transition. "

    4. Line 11, In addition, the -> In addition, the comparison between 
the measured

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

On 2021/11/12 9:34 AM, Ho San Ko via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Hi Hanna, Xiaofeng, and all.
>
> I am sorry for the double notification.
>
> Please check the link in this email (https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/57176 
> <https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/57176>).
> I edited the abstract file name and it generated another link.
> Please ignore the previous notification 
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>
> Thank you.
> Ho-San
>
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