STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Sam,

    Nice abstract.
    Please find my comments and suggestion below :

1.   Line 6, event-by-event -> high-order

2.   Line 7,  depend on the non-equilibrium -> sensitive to the

3.   Line 8, protons and anti-protons-> fluctuations of proton number

4.   Line 9, baryons and anti-baryons -> baryon number fluctuations

5.   Line 10, showed -> shows

6. Line 12, energy range should be 7.7 to 62.4 GeV instead of 7 - 27 GeV.

7. Line 17, It would be nice to mention the baryon chemical potential 
for 3 GeV.

8.  Line 23, I am not sure we will compare to hydrodynamic model at 3 
GeV. Please confirm.

9. At the time of QM, are we ready to present correlation function at 3 
GeV ? Please confirm.

With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng



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