STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Diana,

Nice abstract. In general it looks good. I agree with Xiaofeng’s comment that abstract should be shorter.

First of all please mention just strange particles instead mentioning all possible combinations as p-la and p-xi. Write about strange particle correlations, giving one example (e,g. kaons).

Thanks,

Hanna

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Wiadomość napisana przez Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 18.11.2021, o godz. 09:25:

Hi Diana,

    Nice abstract.
    In general, the length of the abstract is a little bit long.
    Please reduce it.

    For example, we can merged the first , second and third paragraph into one.
    Make it more concise. Rather than this, I am fine with the abstract.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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