STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Moe,

    Nice abstract.
    Please find minor suggestions :

    1. remove "In the neutron stars, a lot of hyperons exist in high 
tempreture and high density condition."
        Actually, we are not sure whether there are lot of hyperson 
exist in neutron star yet.

    2. are need to clarify -> are needed to clarity.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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