STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Nu Xu <nxu AT lbl.gov>]

Hi Ashish,

I have few suggestions on your QM22 poster draft:
1) slide 1 - abstract - 1st line: remove ’the details of’;
2) slide 1 - abstract - 2nd paragraph: note for the center of mass energy: 
“NN” in subscript; 
3) slide 4 - last bullet: replace ’non-negative’ by “close to zero”;
4) slide 5: (i) Make sure that legends in both figures in slide 4 and 5 are 
consistent; (ii) plot (d) - y-axis: the minus sign for 1000 is misplaced;
5) slide 5: Perhaps you could define the term ‘hyper-order cumulant’ in slide 
2? 
6) slide 5: The summary box covers STAR logo. You make make the gaps between 
bullets smaller.

That is all for now. Thanks again,

Nu

> On Mar 31, 2022, at 1:28 PM, apandav via Star-cf-l 
> <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> 
> Dear Hanna,
> 
> Thanks for providing the link to template.
> The poster is made now using the suggested template and can be found on the 
> same link.
> Link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/59000
> 
> Best regards,
> Ashish
> 
> On 2022-03-29 14:50, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l wrote:
>> Dear Ashish,
>> I have few general comments to your poster:
>> 1. General comment: please you a template from Rongrong:
>> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2022_poster_template.pptx
>> WIth this implemented I sign off.
>> Thanks,
>> Hanan
>> Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk
>> PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT
>> E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl
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