STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[apandav <apandav AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Nu,

Thanks a lot for the suggestions.
The updated poster draft considering your suggestions can be found at 
the same link.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/59000

Thanks,
Ashish

On 2022-04-01 05:46, Nu Xu wrote:
> Hi Ashish,
>
> I have few suggestions on your QM22 poster draft:
> 1) slide 1 - abstract - 1st line: remove ’the details of’;
> 2) slide 1 - abstract - 2nd paragraph: note for the center of mass
> energy: “NN” in subscript;
> 3) slide 4 - last bullet: replace ’non-negative’ by “close to zero”;
> 4) slide 5: (i) Make sure that legends in both figures in slide 4 and
> 5 are consistent; (ii) plot (d) - y-axis: the minus sign for 1000 is
> misplaced;
> 5) slide 5: Perhaps you could define the term ‘hyper-order cumulant’
> in slide 2?
> 6) slide 5: The summary box covers STAR logo. You make make the gaps
> between bullets smaller.
>
> That is all for now. Thanks again,
>
> Nu
>
> > On Mar 31, 2022, at 1:28 PM, apandav via Star-cf-l 
> > <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:
> >
> > Dear Hanna,
> >
> > Thanks for providing the link to template.
> > The poster is made now using the suggested template and can be found 
> > on the same link.
> > Link: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/59000
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Ashish
> >
> > On 2022-03-29 14:50, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l wrote:
> > > Dear Ashish,
> > > I have few general comments to your poster:
> > > 1. General comment: please you a template from Rongrong:
> > > https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/QM2022_poster_template.pptx
> > > WIth this implemented I sign off.
> > > Thanks,
> > > Hanan
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