STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Debasish Mallick <dmallick AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Nu,
Thank you very much for your nice suggestions.

Please find my answers inline to your suggestions.
The updated slides is in the same link and also attached here in the 
email.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DtrnFluct_QM22_v8.pdf

Thanks again,
With Best Regards,
Debasish



On 2022-04-01 21:05, Nu Xu via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Hi Debasish,
>
> Here are my suggestions for the nice talk:
>
> 1) On slide 15 - last bullet: Is it right that in the coalescence
> approach, neither correlated nor independent, between p and n,
> reproduce the data. Although the independent approach predicted the
> right trend?
> As one can see in the figure, the independent approach underestimated
> the strength of the p-d correlation .
> At the moment, the bullet may lead to conclusion that the independent
> option reproduced the data.

-- Done. Modified the point to mention exactly that neither of the two 
assumptions in the toy model reproduce the data. I will keep in mind to 
mention in the talk about the independent approach predicting the trend 
correctly while underestimating the strength of the correlation.

> 2) slide 16 - left figure: Should we add the STAR 3GeV data point in?
-- Added.

> 3) slide 17 - outlook - (i) 1st bullet: remove ‘more faithfully’; (ii)
> I do not understand the last bullet. It is incomplete to me.

-- Removed 'more faithfully'.
In the outlook, just wanted the last point could somewhat reflect one of 
the main features of BES-II i.e. the improved acceptance. But, I 
understand that the last point seems incomplete. I have removed the last 
point.
I added one point following from the discussion of slide-16 as follows.
"Understand the production mechanism and freeze-out properties of light 
nuclei".
Kindly let me know your thoughts.

> Regards,
> Nu
>
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