STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Takafumi Niida <niida AT bnl.gov>]

Dear Grigory,

Since the submission deadline is tomorrow (right?), I send you my minor suggestions on your nice abstract. 

l.13: critical end point -> critical point

l.22: “…in collisions of small and large collision systems…” ← remove “collisions of” or “collision” after “large"

Please consider other comments from conveners if you receive. Other than that, I will sign off.

Best regards,

Takafumi

On Apr 9, 2022, at 4:08 AM, webmaster--- via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

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Grigory Nigmatkulov (nigmatkulov AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a  
review, please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/59137

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