STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Hi Jonathan,

Please find below comments to your nice slides:

Slide 2: Add definitions of cumulants (more formulas)

Figure does not contain description on Y axis (title).

Name / describe freeze-out parameters you intend to investigate

Slide 3: Add a reference /any link to KF-Package (describe how it works)

Slide 4: second bullet, add a space: cumulants( -> cumulants (

Add a Poissin baseline (name it), you mention in but never show it

Slide 5: you mention strong suppression for lambda cumulants, add also interpretation of it

In generał, I would add more physics discussion / explanation.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

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