STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[apandav <apandav AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov>]

Dear Hanna,

Thank you for your comments. The revised slides can be found at the same 
link.
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/59832

> Slide 2: add a reference to the second plot
It is already there.
The 2nd reference below the left plot is used for both the plots in this 
slide.

> Slide 3: add a reference to the plot
It was there towards the bottom left. But I have now moved it just above 
the plot.

> Slide 4: add references to the plots
These plots (the left (lattice QCD)  and right (x-y axis cartoon)) was 
made by me with data from the the lattice paper while the middle plot 
(PQM) was arranged for better presentation.

The references for calculations are already there. All these 
calculations from Lattice, PQM are cited below the sentence in the 
yellow box where we mention the prediction from these models.

> Generał comments: add more physics discussion about possible
> interpretation about C7/C1 and C8/C2 measurements.
Given the large uncertainties on the current C7-C8 measurements and 
their consistency with zero within uncertainties, it will be difficult 
to add more interpretation for our data on their signs.
But, we can discuss this in the rehearsals.

Best regards,
Ashish