STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Hanna,

    Please find below the minor suggestions for your to consider.

    1. Slide 3, 4, I suggest keep the same phase diagram in your talk. 
Now you are using two different versions.
    2. Slide 5, You may want to use a better STAR detector image, now 
it looks like a small toy model.
    3. Slide 6, Please define the slope of the spectra.
    4. Slide 8, left figure, you may mention Blast-wave model. right 
figure, the muB converage, you may want to only use one  : 20 ~ 720 MeV.
    5. Slide 23, right plot.  you may add the reference for 4.5 GeV PRC.
    6. Slide 26, please use reference PRL 126, 092301 (2021) and PRC 
104.024902 (2021), PRL 128.202303 (2022). to replace the arXiv #.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

On 2022/7/3 18:50, Xiaofeng Luo via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Hi Hanna,
>
>     Thank you for sending this nice overview talk "Results from the 
> BES program at STAR" to CF PWG.
>     I will go through and give my comments and suggestions.
>     In the meantime, since this STAR talk cover a wide topics 
> including CME, Flow, fluctuations, HBT, di-lepton et al.,
>     I would suggest you also send the overview talk to FCV and lfs-UPC 
> group seeking for comments and suggestions.
>
> Thank you,
> Best Regards,
> Xiaofeng
>
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