STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Pawel,

    Nice presentation.
    Please find my minor comments/suggestions below :

    1. I suggest to show some analysis details. Data sets, PID , pt and 
rapidity cut etc.
        and show a plot of pair purity of different pairs.

    2. In most of the slides, only experimental results are there, no 
description/discussion and explanations words on the slides.
        Please add some wording on each slides to explain, what physics 
message and what we learn from the plot.
        Now, it gives impression that this is slide collecting a sets 
of plots....

    3. Please put k* label under the x-axis, not putting in the plot. 
One column only put once is enough, since they are sharing the same axis.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

On 2022/7/9 19:15, Paweł Szymański via Star-cf-l wrote:
> Dear Hanna and Xiaofeng,
>
> I updated slides. New version is here: 
> https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/wpcf_2022_PSzymanski_v3.pdf
>
> Best regards,
> Paweł
>
> pt., 8 lip 2022 o 21:36 Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l 
> <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> napisał(a):
>
>     Hi Paweł,
>
>     Please add one more change:
>     Slide 16 and 17, add information about the system (pi-K, etc..)
>     somewhere on the plots..
>
>     Thanks,
>     Hanna
>
>     *Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk*
>     PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT
>
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> >     Wiadomość napisana przez Paweł Szymański via Star-cf-l
> >     <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 04.07.2022, o godz. 10:48:
> >
> >     Dear Hanna and Xiaofeng,
> >
> >     Thank you for your comments. The updated version of presentation
> >     is under following link:
> >     https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/wpcf_2022_PSzymanski_v2.pdf
> >
> >     I will prepare some slides for our next meeting.
> >
> >     Best regards,
> >     Paweł
> >
> >     pt., 1 lip 2022 o 11:36 Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l
> >     <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> napisał(a):
> >
> >         Dear Pawel,
> >
> >         Please find below my comments to your nice slides:
> >
> >         Slide 1: add logo of DOE and add that .. „partially funded by ..”
> >         Consider adding outline (can be at the fist slide, just to
> >         have better orientation and navigation through your presentation)
> >
> >         Slide 2: you can add that pair wave function contains FSI
> >         (mostly Coulomb at your case)
> >
> >         Slide 7: you can add the formula: <x_{out}> = \frac{ <r
> >         \beta_f> }{ < \sqrt{\beta_t^2 + \beta_f^2}>} = \frac{r_0
> >         \beta_0 \beta}{ \beta_0^2 + T/m_T}; where: \beta_t = 1/m_T
> >
> >         This would explain why you measure the shift in the emission
> >         process
> >
> >         Slide 16: can you please consider replotting these data
> >         points (for those you have preliminary labels granted) as a
> >         function of <m_T> of the pair? Then I would see any trend we
> >         can conclude about asymmetry.
> >
> >         I would also consider adding information that strong
> >         interaction in K^-  p system needs more investigation, Can
> >         you add what is included into parametrization of the strong
> >         interaction? You use L&L parametrization, please add
> >         parameters of the strong interaction.
> >
> >         Slide 18: Please add one bullet about strong interaction in
> >         proton-kaon system.
> >
> >         With those implemented, I sign off.
> >
> >         Thanks,
> >         Hanna
> >
> >
> >
> >         *Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk*
> >         PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT
> >
> >         *E-mail*: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl
> >         *Tel*: +48 22 234 5851 (office)
> >
> >         *Address*:
> >         Warsaw University of Technology
> >         Faculty of Physics
> >         Nuclear Physics Division
> >         Koszykowa 75
> >         Office: 117b (via 115)
> >         00-662 Warsaw, Poland
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
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> >
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> >
> > >         Wiadomość napisana przez webmaster--- via Star-cf-l
> > >         <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 01.07.2022, o godz. 09:38:
> > >
> > >         Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
> > >
> > >         Pawel Szymanski (pawszy91 AT gmail.com) has submitted a
> > >         material for a review,
> > >         please have a look:
> > >         https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/60146
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