STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Diana,

    It is a well written proceedings.
    Please find my minor suggestions below :

    1. Line 33, In the experiment -> Experimentally， source’s 
properties -> properties of source
    2. Line 36, Equation 1 -> equation (1)
    3. Line 50, a correlation function was fitted to the experimental 
data -> the experimental data was fitted by a correlation function
    4. Line 60, The TOF PID only cover |eta|<0.9.
    5. Line 61, “In the case of TPC, the Bethe-Bloch formula was used 
to calculate the energy loss in the detector expected for a particle 
with a specific mass and momentum,  For PID with TOF, the estimated time 
of flight was used to.....”
        Please re-write this PID part, the energy loss of particles are 
measured by TPC, not calculated. You can just say the ionization energy 
loss of charged particles are measured by TPC.   The estimated time of 
flight -> The measured time of flight and particle momentum

    6. Delete " These two particles were bent away from each other due 
to the magnetic field in TPC."
    7. Line 72, 0-10% of the most central -> 0-10% most central
    8. Line 74, structure on -> structure at
    9. You may mention in the caption of Fig. 1 and 2, that only 
statistical errors are shown on the data points.
    10. Line 99,  is produced ->  is reproduced
    11. Please define k* in the text somewhere, as Fig. 1 use qinv, 
Fig.2 use K* as X-axis.

    With those implemented, I sign off.

Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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