STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Xiaofeng Luo <xfluo.star AT hotmail.com>]

Hi Ashish,

    Nice proceedings.
    Please find my suggestions below :

    1. Title : number -> multiplicity
    2. 2nd line in the introduction: atleast -> at least
    3. quark-gluon-plasma -> quark-gluon plasma
    4. " The negative values, albeit with large uncertainties, and 
energy dependence is consistent with lattice QCD prediction for a 
crossover [6]."
It seems the conclusion is too strong indicating 7.7-200 GeV are all 
crossover. The reference 6 only has calculation with muB less than 200 
MeV.(<20 GeV)
Please specify the energy range and use the conclusions in the STAR 
paper 2207.09837.

    5. The journal # of reference 14 should be Phys. Rev. D 104, 094047 
(2021). Please update it.
https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://journals.aps.org/prd/abstract/10.1103/PhysRevD.104.094047__;!!P4SdNyxKAPE!ErePFd-OSsUqN-l7Q7P66gPduiKe8g8bDJAGQbDJRM6w7jY9i2-hiQIgdyjYE_CpD6fa1g6WF2YtVLsTEqsj1_-XoXft$  

    6. Starting from "Interestingly, the combined signs of χ B 6 and χ 
B 8 can probe different phases...."
        I would suggest not argue like this simply and may even not 
show Fig.2.
        Because : 1) C6 and C8 are complicated as a function of T and 
muB. The Fig. 1 only shows results at muB=0.
https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://iopscience.iop.org/article/10.1088/1674-1137/43/5/054109__;!!P4SdNyxKAPE!ErePFd-OSsUqN-l7Q7P66gPduiKe8g8bDJAGQbDJRM6w7jY9i2-hiQIgdyjYE_CpD6fa1g6WF2YtVLsTEqsj1w3bm12V$  
                      2) In heavy-ion collisions, non-equilibrium 
effect and other background effects, such as baryon number conservation 
should be carefully studied
                          they may have different impact on C6 and C8.

       You may say something like : they show negative values around 
Tc, which can be used to probe the quark-hadron phase transition boundary
      and smooth crossover at muB=0, predicted by Lattice QCD.

    7. Please specify the year taken for the 27 GeV.

    8. In summary : ∼ 20 billion Au+Au collision events ->  ∼ 20 
billion Au+Au collision minimum bias events
         scheduled to be -> are scheduled to be


    With those implemented, I sign off.


Thank you,
Best Regards,
Xiaofeng

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