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Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Dylan Neff ( dneff AT physics.ucla.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Probing-nature-QCD-phase-transition-higher-order-net-proton-number-f

Comment:
Dear Dylan and Ashish,

Thank you for posting the merged abstract.
The abstract looks already in a good shape, but I have some comments as  
follows.

L1: Remove "especially their signs"
L2: details -> nature
L5: ordering -> special ordering
L6-L7: can be tested in heavy-ion collision experiments by measuring  
higher-order cumulants of the net-proton multiplicity distributions.
L12: along with proton factorial cumulants over the full...
L15: we report measurements of net-proton C5/C1 and C6/C2 in Au+Au collisions
L16-L17: ... center-of-mass energies from 3 GeV to 200 GeV,
where 3 GeV data is from the fixed-target program and the other data sets are 
 
from Beam Energy Scan program phase I at RHIC.
L17: remove "\sqrt{sNN}"
L17: Proton factorial cumulants and the variance...
L18: of these distributions -> of proton distributions
L19-L21: explanation for the data sets can be done right after you mention  
center-of-mass energies. See the comment above.
L21: Remove "Protons and... 2.0 GeV/c"
L22-L23: The cumulant measurements are compared with QCD-based FRG model,  
UrQMD and HRG calculations as well as the lattice QCD calculations.

Best regards,
Toshihiro


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