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Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Dylan Neff ( dneff AT physics.ucla.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Probing-nature-QCD-phase-transition-higher-order-net-proton-number-f

Comment:
Dear Dylan,

Thanks for the revised draft.

I have another few suggestions:

- L3: baryon chemical potential

- Please add some references for
-- Negative C5/C1 and C6/C2
-- Special ordering of cumulants
-- local parton density fluctuations
-- factorial cumulants (two-component prediction)
-- Then please check the length limit (<350 words)

With these implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,
Toshihiro

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