STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

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Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Rutik Manikandhan ( manikandhan.rutik AT gmail.com ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Quark-Matter-2023/Mean-pT-fluctuations-30-GeV-fixed-target-collisions-RHIC-Beam-Ener-0

Comment:
Dear Rutik

I would suggest to move the first sentence to the beginning of the 2nd  
paragraph.

Then the 1st paragraph starts with:
The mean p_T fluctuations in heavy-ion collisions are related to the  
temperature fluctuations...

The 2nd paragraph will then be:
(change paragraph) In this poster, we present the first efficiency corrected  
...  3 GeV in the STAR experiment. The mean p_T fluctuations are compared  
with previous BES-I results... from transport model at 3 GeV. (I have removed 
 
"different acceptance window", which is not clear.) We also discuss about the 
 
effects ...

Best regards,
Toshihiro

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