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[Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Zachary Sweger for Rencontres de Moriond got commented by Toshihiro Nonaka
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- Subject: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Zachary Sweger for Rencontres de Moriond got commented by Toshihiro Nonaka
- Date: Sun, 7 May 2023 22:59:30 -0400
Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,
Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material
originally submitted by Zachary Sweger ( zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Rencontres-de-Moriond/Recent-Results-and-Future-Prospects-STAR-Beam-Energy-Scan-Prog-0
Comment:
Dear Zach,
I have some suggestions on your nice proceedings for your consideration.
Best regards,
Toshihiro
Please add line numbers in the draft.
Abstract, line 4: Those data cover a wide range of center-of-mass energy from
3 GeV to 27 GeV.
Page 1
Line 4: center-of-mass energies
Line 6: Beam Energy Scan phase I, phase II, and the Fixed-....
Line 15: The STAR started the FXT in 2018,...
Line 16: The STAR
Line 17: One challenge with the FXT data is ...
Line 19: Analyses of the BES-II...
Page 2
Line 5: in heavy-ion collisions.
Line 17: may provide an insight into...
Line 18, 19: a first-order transition -> the first-order phase transition
Line 18, 22: \sqrt{s_NN} -> the collision energy
Line 23: Further high-statistics measurements in BES-II and FXT may
increase...
Page 3:
Line 20: The results from FXT 3 GeV collisions have been published...
Line 31: ... has begun with the 3.0 GeV data, and the results were found to
be consistent...
Page 4:
Line 4: Cumulants of Proton...
Line 6: in a given acceptance window
Line 6: Cumulants of distributions...
Line 10: and the trivial volume dependence of cumulants can be removed by
taking ratio of different orders of cumulants.
Line 11: Model calculations predict a non-monotonic collision energy
dependence of net-baryon C_4/C_2 in the vicinity...
Line 14-16: motivation for the BES-II and the FXT. The BES-II data covers...
non-monotonicity, and the FXT data will be used to confirm the possible
disappearance of the critical signature below 7.7 GeV.
Line 18: the proton C_4/C_2 at this energy...
Line 19: Remove "So the proton kurtosis...by STAR"
Line 19: You could add a physics implication like:
"... non-critical (UrQMD) baseline, which could indicate that the hadronic
interactions are dominant at 3 GeV."
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