STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["Wensong Cao" <wensong814 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Toshihiro,

Thank you very much for your kind suggestions.

Your suggestions are implemented, the definitions of Rg and lambda are on p13. The link of new version is https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/KK_3GeV_v2.pdf

Best regards,

Wensong

 

 

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Date:  Tue, May 9, 2023 01:57 PM

To:  "STAR Correlations and Fluctuatio"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Subject:  [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Wensong Cao for 18th National Conference on... got commented by Toshihiro Nonaka

 

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material 
originally submitted by Wensong Cao ( wensong814 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/18th-National-Conference-Nuclear-Physics/Kaonplus-Kaonplus-Correlation-Function-AuAu-C

Comment:

Dear Wensong,

I have some suggestions on your nice slides for your consideration.

Best regards,
Toshihiro

p3:
- Add author name to the reference
- ..., so final state interactions...

p4:
- Add author name to the reference
- "Contains strange quaks": can you add a little bit more why it's 
interesting if the particle contains strange quarks.
- I would move the bottom left sentence and the reference closer to the 
figure (or above the figure), and rephrase "Nonmonotonic energy dependence 
for pion source size: author name, PRC92,014904(2015)",
  just to clarify that this sentence mentions about the figure.

p5: mid-rapidity -> midrapidity

p6:
- p(0.2,2.0)GeV/c -> momentum (0.2,2.0) GeV/c, as p is used for protons

p7:
-Track Splitting and Merging Effects (or please use the same style through 
your presentation)
- Same for later slides
- In figures, please use hyphen instead of tilde to represent the centrality: 
0-60%. Also in general  -0.5 < y < 0 rather than y(-0.5,0), and the same for 
pT.
- Same for later slides

p10:
- 1st and 3rd sentence: When -> At
- 2nd sentence: quantum statistics (attractive)

p11:
- It is not clear what "Same" means.

p12:
- I think the 1st sentence fits better to p11 rather than p12.

p14:
- Define Rg and lambda, probably in p13.
- Make legend texts larger

p15:
- 2nd bullet: I would mention about conclusion from the study, e.g., 
"Correlation function from the data can be reproduced by UrQMD model within 
statistical uncertainties."
- Same for the 3rd bullet.
- Last bullet: Collision energy dependence

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