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Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material  
originally submitted by Wensong Cao ( wensong814 AT mails.ccnu.edu.cn ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/18th-National-Conference-Nuclear-Physics/Kaonplus-Kaonplus-Correlation-Function-AuAu-C

Comment:
Dear Wensong,

Thanks for the updates. As your talk is 10 minutes, you may want to reduce  
the slides.

I would merge following sides:
- s6 and s7
- s9 and s10
-s12 and s13
-- I would merge them and show 2x4 panels, where the connection between upper 
 
and lower panels will be clear.
-- Please make sure the ordering is consistent: dca->nsigma->nHitsFit->\Delta 
 
phi
- s17, s18, s19
-- I would remove the bottom right sketch, as I am not sure if the audience  
can follow it during your presentation. This makes some space to merge with  
s18 and s19.
-- I would pick up one representative plot each from s18 and s19, then merge  
with s17

With these and follow-up comments from Hanna considered, I sign off.

Best regards,
Toshihiro

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