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[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Ayon,

Add line numbers to your proceedings.

Thanks,

Hanna

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Wiadomość napisana przez AYON MUKHERJEE via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 12.05.2023, o godz. 07:36:

Thank you, Toshihiro, for going through the manuscript diligently and for commenting!

I have incorporated your comments and re-uploaded.

Thanks, also, for signing-off on the proceedings!

With regards,
Ayon.

On 12/05/2023 6:57 am, webmaster--- via Star-cf-l wrote:

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Toshihiro Nonaka ( tnonaka AT rcf.rhic.bnl.gov ) has commented on a material
originally submitted by Ayon Mukherjee ( mukherjee AT caesar.elte.hu ) at
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/Zimanyi-School-2022/Kaon-femtoscopy-L%C3%A9vy-sources-200-GeV-Au-Au-collisions-STAR

Comment:
Dear Ayon,

I have some minor comments on your very nice proceedings.

With these considered, I sign off.

Best regards,
Toshihiro

L5:
- created at RHIC -> at RHIC
- Preliminary analysis of said data hints  -> Preliminary results hint

L7-8: ... studies at lower center-of-mass energies may... (remove comma)

L66: center-of-mass energy

L74: phase transition

L81: QCD phase diagram

L112: center-of-mass energy per nucleon pair

L118: centrality range

L119: kaon identification with energy loss measured...

L120: distance of closest approach

L127: background events

L130: correlation function

L157: fit range

L187: critical end point

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