STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Anna,

Please find my comments on your nice poster below.

Please add the DOE logo and a statement, „Partially supported by DOE.”

Motivation: 

Spatio-temporal size -> spatio-temporal characteristics

You may be more specific about important information regarding nuclear collisions. In the first paragraph, you mention typical characteristics estimated with femtoscopy (size, shape, evolution). In the second, you could refer to studies of interactions (strong one).

Correlation Femtoscopy Technique:

As you define q_inv, which may be used for identical particles only, I suggest mentioning just q as momentum difference (no formula as you provided valid for q_inv). You use k* (determined in PRF) for any system containing at least one deuteron.

Results:

You are welcome to use preliminary pion results, p-d, and d-d. Preliminary p-p results will be replaced with new ones, so this should not be shown any longer before final publication.

With those implemented, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

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Wiadomość napisana przez Anna Kraeva via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 06.06.2023, o godz. 06:01:

Dear Toshihiro,

I have updated the abstract. Please take a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/63855

Thanks, 
Anna

вт, 6 июн. 2023 г. в 03:50, 野中俊宏 via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:

Dear Anna,

Please find a few minor comments on your nice abstract. With these considered, I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

Title: collisions -> Collisions

L3: Heavy-ion collision experiments provide a unique opportunity...

L7: In this report, the results on the measurements of femtoscopic correlations will be presented for proton-proton,....

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