STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Zachary Sweger <zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu>]

Dear Toshihiro,

Thank you for the comments, the new version is located here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DNP_2023_Abstract_v3.pdf

Thank you,

Zach

On Wed, Jun 28, 2023 at 6:17 PM 野中俊宏 <nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp> wrote:

Dear Zach,

I have a minor comment on your nice abstract:

Please replace "moments" by "cumulants" throughout the title and main texts.

With this implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

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Hi Hanna,

Thank you for the feedback, the updated abstract can be found here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/DNP_2023_Abstract_v2.pdf

Best,

Zach

On Fri, Jun 23, 2023 at 10:51 PM Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Hi Zachary,

I have only two minor comments regarding your nice abstract.

Line 6 and 8, where you mention collision energies, please add \sqrt{s_{NN}} = .. and the 3 GeV (line 6) or 7.7 GeV (line 8).

With those implemented, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

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