STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[野中俊宏 <nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear Daniel,

Your poster looks very nice and I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

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件名: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Daniel Kincses for AUM 2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Daniel,

Thank you for addressing my comments.

I sing off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

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Wiadomość napisana przez Kincses Dániel <kincses AT ttk.elte.hu> w dniu 26.07.2023, o godz. 11:49:

Dear Hanna,

Thank you for your useful comments and suggestions; I implemented them and uploaded a new version at

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/presentations/AUM-2023/Pion-interferometry-Levy-stable-sources-sqrtsNN-200-GeV-AuAu-collisions-STA-0

Regarding panel 3), I would like to leave the figure as it is, since it is directly taken from the cited publication. I also wrote the paper citation on the figure.

Thanks a lot,
Daniel

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Tárgy: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Daniel Kincses for AUM 2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Daniel,

1. Daniel Kincses -> Daniel Kincses for the STAR Collaboration 

2. Please make sure you define all quantities on your poster.

Having references is ok, but no one who looks at your poster will not browse the internet simultaneously to understand what is discussed in your poster. I know it requires modification of the content (more space), but indeed it should be there. 

What is the size of the poster? If A0/A1, you will have fonts and figures big enough to increase them a little bit. 

3. Bullet 3: FSI. Indeed we don’t expect the significant contribution of the strong interaction in two-pion correlations. Indeed, showing a ratio of (QS+COUL)/(QS+COUL+SI) will nicely show what the effect is (mainly if you plot 6 different correlation functions on one figure). 

4. There is no discussion section. Please add what are the outcomes of your studies. 

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:

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Office: 117b (via 115)

00-662 Warsaw, Poland

Wiadomość napisana przez webmaster--- via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 24.07.2023, o godz. 10:46:

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Daniel Kincses (kincses AT ttk.elte.hu) has submitted a material for a review,  
please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64392

Deadline: 2023-08-01
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