STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[野中俊宏 <nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear Zach,

I have some comments on your nice poster presentation.

With these implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

1. Introduction

(Critical Fluctuations)

- 1st bullet: Fluctuations of conserved charges

- 4th bullet: Cite Misha’s paper here?

(Cumulants and Moments)

- Cite [1] here?

(Previous Results)

- 2nd bullet: Add [2] at the end of the sentence

- 3rd and 4th bullets: Insert space after “=”.

2. The STAR Fixed-Target Program

- 1st bullet: … cannot operate at Au+Au collisions below 7.7 GeV.

- 3rd bullet: New data from \sqrt{s_NN} = 3.0 - 7.7 GeV

(Challenges)

- 2nd bullet: higher energies, instead of highest energy?

- 3rd bullet: ID -> identification

3. Acceptance

(Top figures) Inside each panel, \sqrt{s_{NN}} = X GeV

(Right bullets)

- 1st bullet: Standard analysis window (write down rapidity and pT acceptance here) shown in…

- 2nd bullet: Insert space after “=”

(Overlap at 7.7 GeV): Insert space after “=”

- 1st bullet: Insert space after “=”

- Middle panel: \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 7.7 GeV

References

[2] (20 2022) -> (2022)

Remove “In” and “p.”

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件名: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Zachary Sweger for Quark Matter 2023 submitted for review

 

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Zachary Sweger (zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu) has submitted a material for a review, 
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https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/64782

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