STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Zachary Sweger <zwsweger AT ucdavis.edu>]

Dear Hanna and Toshihiro,

Thank you both for your comments. I've incorporated them into the poster and the new version can be found here: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/Zach_Poster_QM_v1.pdf

One note: Hanna's second comment was about adjusting the wording on the same line that Toshihiro commented on, so I used Hanna's phrasing. I hope this is okay.

Thank you!

Zach

On Thu, Aug 24, 2023 at 4:59 AM Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Zach,

Please find my minor comments on your nice poster.

Add somewhere a logo of DoE and add the statement  „Partially funded by..”

Part 2:

(RHIC) can only collide -> collides

With those implemented, I sign off.

Enjoy the conference!

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

Tel: +48 22 234 5851 (office)

Address:

Warsaw University of Technology

Faculty of Physics

Nuclear Physics Division

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00-662 Warsaw, Poland

Wiadomość napisana przez 野中俊宏 via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> w dniu 24.08.2023, o godz. 10:21:

Dear Zach,

I have some comments on your nice poster presentation.

With these implemented, I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

1. Introduction

(Critical Fluctuations)

- 1st bullet: Fluctuations of conserved charges

- 4th bullet: Cite Misha’s paper here?

(Cumulants and Moments)

- Cite [1] here?

(Previous Results)

- 2nd bullet: Add [2] at the end of the sentence

- 3rd and 4th bullets: Insert space after “=”.

2. The STAR Fixed-Target Program

- 1st bullet: … cannot operate at Au+Au collisions below 7.7 GeV.

- 3rd bullet: New data from \sqrt{s_NN} = 3.0 - 7.7 GeV

(Challenges)

- 2nd bullet: higher energies, instead of highest energy?

- 3rd bullet: ID -> identification

3. Acceptance

(Top figures) Inside each panel, \sqrt{s_{NN}} = X GeV

(Right bullets)

- 1st bullet: Standard analysis window (write down rapidity and pT acceptance here) shown in…

- 2nd bullet: Insert space after “=”

(Overlap at 7.7 GeV): Insert space after “=”

- 1st bullet: Insert space after “=”

- Middle panel: \sqrt{s_{NN}} = 7.7 GeV

References

[2] (20 2022) -> (2022)

Remove “In” and “p.”

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