STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Mate Csanad <csanad AT bnl.gov>]

Dear Yevheniia,

Thanks for all this, let me just mention one thing: the formula should in 
fact be
(q_i * q_j * R^2_{i,j})^(alpha/2)
so that for diagonal sources it is
(q_i^2 * R^2_{i,i})^(alpha/2) = q_i^alpha * R^alpha_{i,i}
and for a spherically symmetric source, it is
|q*R|^alpha,
but for the poster you only need the first formula above.

Thanks, best regards,
Mate

2023. 08. 26. 16:43 keltezéssel, Eugenia Khyzhniak via Star-cf-l írta:
> Dear Hanna and Toshihiro,
> Thank you for the comments! I updated my poster.
> I tried to shorten a bit femtoscopy part, added link to "homogeneity region", 
> added kT definition and updated fit function to make it suitable for both 
> Gaussian and Levy.
> Best,
> Yevheniia
>
> On Sat, Aug 26, 2023, 9:50 AM 野中俊宏 via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov 
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>     Dear Yevhenia,
>
>     As Hanna commented, your poster will read further better if you can 
> shorten
>     some sentences.
>
>     Other than that, your poster looks very nice and I sign off.
>
>     Best regards,
>     Toshihiro
>     
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>     Dear Yevheniia,
>
>     Femtoscopy section, particles emission figure. If I remember correctly, I
>     think you just need to repeat the [2] reference.
>
>     Thanks,
>     Hanna
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> >     Wiadomość napisana przez Eugenia Khyzhniak <eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com
> >     <mailto:eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com>> w dniu 25.08.2023, o godz. 22:46:
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> >     Dear Hanna,
> >     > "add references to figures that are not prepared by you"
> >     Can you please clarify what figures do you mean?
> >     Best,
> >     Yevheniia
> >
> >     On Fri, Aug 25, 2023, 4:12 AM Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l
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> >         Dear Yevhenia,
> >
> >         Please find my comments on your nice poster.
> >
> >         I have a general comment to consider that instead of full sentences,
> >         you can try to make these statements shorter (Femtoscopy part).
> >         Please define k_T and add references to figures that are not prepared
> >         by you.
> >         Please add the formula that is used in Levy fit
> >
> >         With those considered, I sign off.
> >         Thanks,
> >         Hanna
> >
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> > >         Yevheniia Khyzhniak (eugenia.sh.el AT gmail.com
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