STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[野中俊宏 <nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear Anna,

I have a few minor comments on your nice slides.

With these and Hanna's comments considered, I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

S4:

- Some texts miss the electric charge for pions, so I would add appropriate superscripts, e.g., \pi^{\pm}.

- "Identification of particles" above the figures could be removed to save space.

S13:
- You could consider to make it consistent if you're talking about past/present. There are both "are presented" and "was presented".

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件名: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Anna Kraeva for ISHEPP-2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Conveners,

Sorry for bothering you, could you please give your comments for my presentation?
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/65064

Thank you,
Anna

чт, 7 сент. 2023 г. в 22:18, webmaster--- via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:

Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Anna Kraeva (annakraeva555 AT gmail.com) has submitted a material for a review, 
please have a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/65064

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