STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Vinh Luong <lbavinh AT gmail.com>]

Dear Toshihiro,

Thank you very much for your comments.

I have updated the presentation: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/65073

Kind regards,

Vinh

On Wed, Sep 13, 2023 at 10:53 AM 野中俊宏 via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov> wrote:

Dear Vinh,

I have a few minor comments on your nice slides.

With these and Hanna's comments considered, I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

S2:

- The 3rd bullet looks to me a bit too long as the outline. You could consider to shorten it like "Extracted femtoscopic parameters for pion pairs  from FXT" or whatever you think is appropriate.

- 5th bullet: Collision energy dependence

S4:

- Title: Fixed-Target (typo)

S10:

- Title: Collision energy ...

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