STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

["Yu Zhang" <yuz AT ccnu.edu.cn>]

Dear Toshihiro,

Thank you very much for your detailed comments.

I've updated my abstract accordingly at the same link.

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/65129

Best regards,

Yu 

 

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From:  "star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Date:  Fri, Sep 15, 2023 01:07 PM

To:  "star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov"<star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>;

Cc:  "Toshihiro Nonaka"<nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>;

Subject:  Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Yu Zhang for QPT 2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Yu,

Please find some comments below on your nice abstract.

With these considered, I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

General:

Given that the conference title is "QCD phase transition (QPT)" and many of the audience could be familiar with this field, I wonder if the introduction part on the QCD phase diagram may not needed.

I would remove L1-L5 (... by various theories). But I do not have a strong feeling on this, so you could keep the current introduction if you think it is needed.

Title: Baryon-Strangeness Correlations...

L2-3: ... chemical potential, $\mu_B=0$~MeV, the transition between .... matter is a smooth crossover.

L10: proton cumulants

L12: could exist at higher collision energies.

L12-L13: of the QGP signal

L13: baryon-strangeness correlations

L14: , K^{\pm}, and hyperons. (add comma before "and", remove "included")

- Better to specify which hyperons are included in the measurement.

L14-L15: ... and have measured the ratio C_{BS} = <BS>_c/<S^2>_c, where <BS>_c represents the 2nd-order mix-cumulant

between net-baryon and net-strangeness while <S^2>_c is the 2nd-order net-strangeness cumulant.

L15-L16: In this talk, we present the centrality dependence of the C_BS ratio from \sqrt{s_{\rm NN}} = 3 and 200 GeV....

(you could add rapidity/pT acceptance or anything else depending on your plan for the analysis)

L17-L18: ... and discuss about the physics...

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Dear star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov members,

Yu Zhang (yuz AT ccnu.edu.cn) has submitted a material for a review, please have 
a look:
https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/65129

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