STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[野中俊宏 <nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear Jin,

Please find a few minor comments on your nice abstract.

With these considered, I sign off.

Best regards,

Toshihiro

Title: at RHIC/STAR -> from the STAR Experiment at RHIC

L10: You could change the paragraph from "In this talk,..."

L12: in the first phase of BES [1]. 

- ​remove RHIC

- ​You could cite the accepted paper (or arXiv) here.

L12-L13: remove parentheses for "up to the sixth order"

L14: ... exponent will be presented. (remove comma)

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件名: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Jin Wu for QPT 2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Jin,

Thanks for posting your nice abstract.

I don’t have further comments, it looks good to me. I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

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https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/65305

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