STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[野中俊宏 <nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear Anna,

Nice slides. I sign off.

Best regars,

Toshihiro

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件名: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Anna Kraeva for NUCLEUS-2023 submitted for review

 

Dear Hanna,

Thank you for your comments! I have updated the presentation. Please have a look: https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/node/65301

Thanks,
Anna

пт, 29 сент. 2023 г. в 12:43, Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk via Star-cf-l <star-cf-l AT lists.bnl.gov>:

Dear Anna,

Thanks for posting your nice slides.

I have a few minor comments:

The general suggestion is to reduce the amount of text on slides, keeping the same pieces of the most important information. Sentences you may substitute with shorter statements that you will describe more during your presentation.

Slide 5:

The bottom-left figure shows the CF as a function of q_inv. Please define q_inv or, instead, use just q. The same comments about R_inv.

With these addressed, I sign off.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

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