STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk <hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl>]

Dear Vinh,

Please find my comments to your nice proceedings.

General comment: decide whether you mention all figures as: Fig. 1 or Figure 1

Linę 23: 7.7 -> 13.7 

Linę 48: out-side-long -> „out-side-long”

Linę 55: remove a space after function,

Linę 58-59: out->„out, side->”side”, long-> „long”

Linę 60: out-long -> „out-long"

Figure 1, 2, 3, 4, 5- please increase the figure or increase the fonts.

Summary: (consider as Conclusion) please extend the physics discussion. Discuss more details, except of what was shown and that your results follow HADES and STAR observables. 

References: line breaking does not work anywhere.

Consider making references more compact to gain extra space for increased figures.

Thanks,

Hanna

Hanna Paulina Zbroszczyk

PhD DSc Eng, Professor WUT

E-mail: hanna.zbroszczyk AT pw.edu.pl

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