STAR Correlations and Fluctuations PWG

[野中俊宏 <nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>]

Dear ShinIchi,

Thank you for your careful reading and comments. 

The revised version can be found here:

https://drupal.star.bnl.gov/STAR/system/files/ISMD2023_proceedings.pdf

The discussion in L233 has been clarified by adding footnotes in L223 and rephrasing at L234-235 in the revised draft.

Thank you.

Best regards,

Toshihiro   

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送信日時: 2023年11月16日 20:54
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CC: 野中俊宏 <nonaka.toshihiro.ge AT u.tsukuba.ac.jp>
件名: Re: [Star-cf-l] STAR presentation by Toshihiro Nonaka for ISMD 2023 got commented by Toshihiro Nonaka

 

Dear Toshihiro
Thanks for the very nice write-up, I've enjoyed reading. I send you some minor
comments/corrections for you to consider as you see in the following.
Best regards, ShinIchi

L81: “mu_p - mu_pbar” for odd-order, “-" in stead of “+”?
Eq1: ^2 inside < > missing in the left hand side of the formula?
Eq2: the same as above, and also for the 1st term in the right hand side of the formula.
L170: mix-cumulant of (m, n), where “m” were defined earlier, but not yet for “n”
L181: including “the cumulant of” sideband particles …
L233: the best significance of <L^2>_C, in stead of L, or “cumulant of interest”
L240: The slightly different centrality dependence …
Fig.9: The lattice “magenta” color looks more like purple than pink to me,
          and looks somewhat different from “magenta” line in Fig.6
affiliation: add space “ ” between Center and for 
address: add “Tenno-dai 1-1-1” before Tsukuba,
postal code for our institute is 305-8571


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